I'm feeling pretty good about this new short story. Someone should take a look at it and let me know what they think.


Come CleanI step into the darkness in search of the light in front of me I walk towards the hanging bulb dimly lighting a shower I rip open the old curtain hanging upon rusty rings Inside three walls and a rusty faucet below a showerhead I strip off my filthy clothes and step into the shower I reach towards the rusty faucet turning it slowly Warm clear water begins to run through the showerhead I stand at the back of the shower waiting watchingCome Clean
Slowly closing my eyes I step into the raining water Feeling the water run down my body, the filth slipping away Running my fingers through my ha
Mrs Brisby
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"Don't worry, at least the god of death will mourn for you." - iAnti - Fayt using Thanatos' Tear
Hope you enjoyed it
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Without you I cannot confide in anything
The hope is pale designed in light of dreams you bring
Summer's gone, the day is done soon comes the night
Biding time, leaving the line and out of sight
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I'm just a Cuddly.Blue.Panda [link]
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"Don't worry, at least the god of death will mourn for you." - iAnti - Fayt using Thanatos' Tear
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'That's very sensitive from a man who wears such tight pants.'
"It forces all the blood to my heart."
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Those who restrain desire do so because
Theirs is weak enough to be restrained.
just saying HI
now saying good bie
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comment me
i command you too
i command it
................please im so lonely without comments
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Bare on your tomb
I am a prayer for your loneliness
And would you ever soon
Come above unto me?
For once upon a time
From the binds of your lowliness
I could always find
The right slot for your sacred key
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i was running in circles,
i hurt myself
just to find my purpose.
everything was so worthless,
i didn't deserve this,
but to me you were perfect.
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i am the second
alone in a faceless crowd
a human caught
in monochrome dreams
i scream to wake up
my voice drowns deep underground
only the dead can hear me,
see me
(\m/)(~.^)(\m/)
-INSERTS ICEE EMOTE-
for your secret lover XD
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i was running in circles,
i hurt myself
just to find my purpose.
everything was so worthless,
i didn't deserve this,
but to me you were perfect.
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